Zack
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Post by Zack on Jul 5, 2007 14:53:05 GMT -5
Name:Zack Blue Age:13 Gender:male Description:Zack has light brown, shoulder-length hair and brown eyes. He wears a t-shirt and a faded pair of old jeans and dirty old sneakers that are fallying apart. He's tall and has a slight tan from being outside a lot. He sometime wears his hair in a ponytail. Personality: Zack is very ambitious and sometimes over-estimates his abilities. He likes to be fair, to people and pokemon, and hates poeple who use them as tools. History: Zack grew up helping his mother around the house and waiting for his dad to come home. He was a pokemon trainer and always seemed gone. His father came home only a few weeks out of the year. Everytime Zack asked if he was old enough to start his journey, but his dad kept saying no. So Zack was content to play and have pretend fights with is fathers pokemon. He had a Charmeleon that he liked to play with the most. He was his fathers prize pokemon. This went on for a few years until Zack was thirteen. His father came home one day and when he asked him the usual question he said yes, and that he was supposed to go get his pokemon from the Professor and start his journey. Starter Pokemon: Sandshrew Items: Pokeballs, original style pokedex
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Post by Seraphinu on Jul 5, 2007 14:58:09 GMT -5
Your personality and description are kinda short. You should lengthen them.
But other than that, I'm fine with it. Just edit what I suggested, and I'll review it again.
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Zack
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Post by Zack on Jul 5, 2007 15:05:24 GMT -5
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Post by Seraphinu on Jul 5, 2007 15:08:06 GMT -5
While I still find the personality a bit short, I'm ACCEPTING this anyway.
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