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Post by Nate Grey on Jul 1, 2007 7:49:56 GMT -5
Name: Nate Thomas Age: 10 Gender: Male Description: He wears a Blue Jacket, orange t-shirt, blue trousers, hazel eyes, light brown hair with white highlights, he is 5'5 Personality: he is usually moody and hardly ever speaks, only to stand up to what he believes is right, he likes to show off in front of cute girls, he likes all kind of Pokemon but he prefers Steel types History: He is the son of Blaze and Rika. He traveled to the Prota with his parents when he was five from Johto and his parents gave birth to his younger brother Zeak on there way to Prota. Now that he has come to the age 10 he wants to start his Pokemon Journey with his younger brother to keep Nate out of trouble with girls. Blaze gave his son a Squirtle what he caught on the way to Prota, and had been saving it for the day Nate leaves on his Pokemon challenge. Starter Pokemon: Squirtle Items: 5x Pokeball a half broken silver pokeball that once belonged to Squirtle
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Post by Seraphinu on Jul 1, 2007 11:01:08 GMT -5
First, Kura and I came from SDDK, where characters cannot be based off of T.V. shows, books, movies, ect. So I sincerely doubt he will allow it here, at his own forum. Plus, it annoys me to death. Change your characters appearence, please. And don't use a picture. To me, pictures emphasize the laziness of actually typing out something. Did you look at the accepted profiles? None of them had pictures in place of description. And, as I said to another person, one sentence =/= equal an adequete description of personality. Please, edit, and make it longer. And more detailed. Like, how he would react to others, or certain situations. Or, does he ever act differently? History... needs a lot of work. Kura wants beginning trainers. Having a ten year old beat ALL the challenges and have a Scizor and a Shiny Togepei, not only is this considered power playing, but that is most certainly NOT a beginning trainer. PENDING
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Post by Shinji Kachu on Jul 1, 2007 11:06:23 GMT -5
Wait tthat is totally wrong a picture could be a description of yourself. There isn't anything wrong with this profile please accept it
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Post by Dark on Jul 1, 2007 17:01:06 GMT -5
Actually there is like Seraphi said. His History is totally wrong. He is INDEED supposed to be a beginning trainer so basically this cannot be accepted. Also the picture is like it's off of X-Men or something around there. A WORD description would be a bit better then a picture. The Personaility could use more description please, instead of just that.
I'm also off of the site SDDK so me and Seraphi know what we're doing when it comes to profiles.
NOT ACCEPTED
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Post by Nate Grey on Jul 5, 2007 13:17:13 GMT -5
i have changed it
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Post by Seraphinu on Jul 5, 2007 13:28:04 GMT -5
I'm still protesting the starter. Scizor is hardly suitable as a starter.
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Post by Nate Grey on Jul 10, 2007 15:32:40 GMT -5
change it again
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Post by Seraphinu on Jul 10, 2007 23:51:09 GMT -5
Thank you for changing it to something more suitable for a beginning trainer. (you see? I may be headstrong and stubborn but I am reasonable. xD)
ACCEPTED.
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